InfiniteStar
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Mark as Offensive 11/5/2009 6:17:28 PM |
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this is so sad, i wish they didn't have to go through that.
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and_yet_again
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Mark as Offensive 11/5/2009 7:03:46 PM |
its a crazy world where you can go out a hero and come back a stranger, or not come back at all. we of the western culture take so much for granted, and forget the rivers of blood our world is built on. i cant see any way to stop the madness of war......... maybe no-one can ....... perhaps the best we can do is be thankful for what our soldiers do for us.
both my brothers are in the forces............ im really scared that theyll end up hurt/changed etc.........
*for li* by andrea gibson
Eli came back from Iraq and tattooed a teddy bear onto the inside of his wrist above that a medic with an IV bag above that an angel but Eli says the teddy bear won't live and I know I don't know but I say, "I know" cause Eli's only twenty-four and I've never seen eyes further away from childhood than his eyes old with a wisdom he knows I'd rather not have Eli's mother traces a teddy bear onto the inside of my arm and says, "not all casualties come home in body bags" and I swear I'd spend the rest of my life writing nothing but the word light at the end of this tunnel if I could find the f***ing tunnel I'd write nothing but white flags somebody pray for the soldiers somebody pray for what's lost somebody pray for the mailbox that holds the official letters to the mothers, ''''''''''''''fathers, ''''''''''''''''''''sisters, and little brothers of Micheal 19... Steven 21... John 33 how ironic that their deaths sound like bible verses the hearse is parked in the halls of the high school recruiting black, brown and poor while anti-war activists outside walter reed army hospital scream 100, 000 slain as an amputee on the third floor breathes forget-me-nots onto the window pain but how can we forget what we never knew our sky is so perfectly blue it's repulsive somebody tell me where god lives cause if god is truth god doesn't live here our lies have seared the sun too hot to live by there are ghosts of kids who are still alive touting M16s with trembling hands while we dream ourselves stars on Survivor another missile sets fire to the face in the locket of a mother who's son needed money for college and she swears she can feel his photograph burn how many wars will it take us to learn that only the dead return the rest remain forever caught between worlds of shrapnel shatters body of three year old girl to welcome to McDonalds can I take your order? the mortar of sanity crumbling stumbling back home to a home that will never be home again Eli doesn't know if he can ever write a poem again one third of the homeless men in this country are veterans and we have the nerve to Support Our Troops with pretty yellow ribbons while giving nothing but dirty looks to their outstretched hands tell me what land of the free sets free its eighteen-year-old kids into greedy war zones hones them like missiles then returns their bones in the middle of the night so no one can see each death swept beneath the carpet and hidden like dirt each life a promise we never kept Jeff Lucey came back from Iraq and hung himself in his parents basement with a garden hose the night before he died he spent forty five minutes on his fathers lap rocking like a baby rocking like daddy, save me and don't think for a minute he too isn't collateral damage in the mansions of washington they are watching them burn and hoarding the water no senators' sons are being sent out to slaughter no presidents' daughters are l
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and_yet_again
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Mark as Offensive 11/5/2009 7:05:06 PM |
(oops, and the end of it)
no presidents' daughters are licking ashes from their lips or dreaming up ropes to wrap around their necks in case they ever make it home alive our eyes are closed america there are souls in the boots of the soldiers america f*** your yellow ribbon you wanna support our troops bring them home and hold them tight when they get here
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circa_complacent
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Mark as Offensive 11/5/2009 8:49:19 PM |
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good poem. i dont' agree with the message, but good poem.
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pretty_in_pink1309
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Mark as Offensive 11/7/2009 3:45:03 AM |
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truely all soldiers are heroes. they help to keep us safe and we should all be thankful for that.. i have three friends in iraq and its hard..we should all thank them <3
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and_yet_again
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Mark as Offensive 11/7/2009 5:32:21 AM |
lols, kinda figures u wouldnt circa......... its funny, in that one i dont even find much of an opinion, more a statement of a view on the truth.......
(not sure if i made sense just then)
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kilroy85
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Mark as Offensive 11/7/2009 2:55:42 PM |
there is definite opinion
I like the quote that goes something like 'A true soldier fights not because he hates what is in front of him, but because he loves what is behind him.'
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whatboutyou?
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Mark as Offensive 11/7/2009 5:14:49 PM |
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i'd have to disagree with you. the truth is definitely not 'the war is bad soldiers should come home'..that's a definite opinion.
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whatboutyou?
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Mark as Offensive 11/7/2009 5:15:07 PM |
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i'm circa btw if you forgot.
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and_yet_again
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Mark as Offensive 11/8/2009 4:57:50 AM |
yeh.......i gathered the circa/wby thing :D
lols, ok, yeh, when you put it like that, there is an opinion........... but i guess i see that opinion as a statement of the truth.....
if you think the opinion is " the war is bad soldiers should come home" and you dont agree with that opinion, are you saying that you believe war is good??
sorry, im not meaning to sound, i dunno, um, critical or whatever. just kinda confused on that one.
i mean, i havnt got a solution to war in general, or even to any specific wars.........
oh god, i really dont know. i shouldnt even venture an opinion. im kept safe and i live in luxury, and its all provided on other peoples oppression and pain, and my culture is fighting againstt hose that would wish to be free. and when they go out there, they believe that they are doing the right thing.
i just dont f*ing know...........
(sorry, war talk kinda pushes some buttons for me :/)
oh, i like the quote kilroy :D i guess that what makes it so complicate though.......
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