| Username | Post | Date |
|---|---|---|
| il_futuro_politico | I have to write at least 5 poems for my literary magazine class...and I am having much trouble coming up with a start to my poem... |
2/11/2012 11:38:20 PM Mark as Offensive |
| prodigy | Sorry... I've been having problems with my poems, also... | 2/12/2012 4:46:03 AM Mark as Offensive |
| il_futuro_politico |
What do you think if I start out with this: My heart..loving..but never loved... |
2/12/2012 9:55:58 AM Mark as Offensive |
| il_futuro_politico |
or like this: Beauty and Love...truly are not seen through the eye of the beholder...but felt through the heart of he who dares to love |
2/12/2012 10:05:03 AM Mark as Offensive |
| LeviRoss | I'm probably just weird but when i write poems I always come up with the last line first. And i like your 'my heart is loving but never loved' line. Maybe come up with something that describes that feeling then hammer the point of the poem down by finishing it off with that line. | 2/12/2012 11:03:06 AM Mark as Offensive |
| il_futuro_politico | yep that works...thank you kindly kind stranger...:) | 2/12/2012 11:17:11 AM Mark as Offensive |
| prodigy |
I like Levizzle's idea, also... My heart and mind have agreed on one thing this entire year, and that is to stifle all my creative juices just enough that I can only do things pertaining to school. They won't let me revolt =/ |
2/12/2012 2:14:23 PM Mark as Offensive |
| Dreaminglifeaway | I'll email some to you | 2/12/2012 6:10:16 PM Mark as Offensive |
| il_futuro_politico | I can't use something written by someone else..I've never cheated before and I don't want to do it now..but if you can help me write my own...I will give you credit..it just does not feel right cheating you out of credit for my own gains | 2/12/2012 7:51:40 PM Mark as Offensive |
| Dreaminglifeaway | COME ONNNNNNN | 2/12/2012 11:16:46 PM Mark as Offensive |
| il_futuro_politico | No BonBon..I just can't do that to you | 2/12/2012 11:25:30 PM Mark as Offensive |
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